较早一点知道这个原则，你的文书和论文就不会凉了！

>UNC’s basketball team lost the Final Four game against Kansas because it could not consistently rebound the ball.

辞汇语替代单词

Example:

In the event that going out for the purpose of eating with them cannot be avoided, it is necessary that we first go to the ATM, in light of the fact that I am out of cash.

Revision:

If we must go out to eat with them, we should first go to the ATM because I am out of cash.

删去避免的形容该词

e.g. very few=rare

删去重复润色的形容该词

e.g. each and every book = every book

移除避免的限定该词

去掉actually, really, basically, probably, very, definitely, somewhat, kind of, extremely, practically等这类该词

Example:

Because a great many of the words in this sentence are basically unnecessary, it would really be a very good idea to edit somewhat for conciseness.

Revision:

Because many of the words in this sentence are unnecessary, we should edit it.

能用简单该词，须要有用该词

e.g. simultaneously with = while

有话直说

同样删去it is quite true that / it is clear that这类从未任何用途的套话

少用被动句

形容该词不是一种语法扯误，在相符逻辑学的科学用到语境下它是有用的。但是用形容该词作者经常才会造成辞汇过多。

被动句也才会让你的大众觉得越读越困惑，不能耐心找出句子的形容该词。

因此，如果不是不能形容该词重申的情况，尽量作者形容该词前头在第一位的尽早句。方便教师或者入学考试司的阅读。

Example:

The 1780 constitution of Massachusetts was written by John Adams.

Revision:

John Adams wrote the 1780 Massachusetts Constitution.

Another example:

The letter was taken to the mailbox by Sally.

Revision:

Sally took the letter to the mailbox.

别用从句套从句

Example:

In high school, where I had the opportunity for three years of working with the student government, I realized how significantly a person’s enthusiasm can be destroyed merely by the attitudes of his superiors.

Revision:

In high school, during three years on the student council, I saw students’ enthusiasm destroyed by insecure teachers and cynical administrators.

英文作者时，可以凭借以上简约所谓，上来写上来自我审视；也可以在公函或学术著作成稿后，自我proofreading时参考资料这些比赛规则。

另外，同样的转换成自然环境才会有最出色的输出。所以，多阅读海外手抄本或者新闻媒体也是有利的，因为手抄本或者报刊杂志的词汇经常优雅灵巧。

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